DREAMS of a CLOUD
Peruse the many random ramblings of a writer-in-training as I build stories and develop my craft.
25 May 2024 part 2
Sir Deneth Rinof: A Poem
I wrote my poem for the week! It’s based on the leader of one of the major antagonistic factions in my campaign. If it runs long enough for him to appear, I would be ecstatic. He is a hodge podge of several different characters that at first, didn’t seem connected, but the more I explored the themes around this character, the more tied together they all seem. Top of the list is Denethor from Lord of the Rings, and Sir Gideon Ofnir the All-Hearing from Elden Ring. (Yes, I’m not using his “official” title, but I find this one more apt, anyway.) Then Taravangian from The Stormlight Chronicles got mixed in a bit, though I doubt my character is anywhere near that composed or capable. Through in a dash of general Bloodborne into the mix, and you get Sir Deneth Rinof the All-Hearing, head of the Oreilles de la Tour (Ears of the Tower), with connections to Great Old Ones and whatnot. His faction focuses a lot on illusions and puppets, at least at first, with more and more eldritch entities showing up as the campaign progresses.
Sir Deneth Rinof
“Know thy place.”
“Hold thy tongue.”
“Speak not above thy station.”
What fool, this king!
Wherefore should I bow to him?
“Heretic.”
Empty words.
What glory would gods grant man?
My soul seeks more
To ascend beyond mere divine.
Deeper truths
Darker secrets
Words to bend them to my will
Both kings and priests
And surely I shall do it
Found at last!
Beyond ken
I draw near that distant star
Madness follows
Eyes inside my screaming mind
All are doomed
I am bound
None can oppose such terror
Bow before it
I will offer it the world