DREAMS of a CLOUD
Peruse the many random ramblings of a writer-in-training as I build stories and develop my craft.
17 April 2024
There stands a man
And the World hails him, King
I was quite proud of this one. The mother and love stanzas need work still, I think, but overall I like how it turned out. Especially since every character listed, except (maybe) Elliott, is or becomes a dragon by the end of the series. For context, stanzas 1 and 2 are book 1; 3, 4, and 5 are book 2; and the last is book 3, which has a lot more focus on Arylwen and less on Charles, so that makes sense.
I actually started this by trying to see how few words I could use to “tell” the Majesty story. I wasn’t happy with that, and wound up here instead.
There stands a boy
Trembling in fear at the feet of the Pirate’s throne
Yet does not yield
And the Pirate hails him, King
There stands a boy
Looking into the face of an old, tired Mountain
And offers hope
And the Mountain hails him, King
There kneels a youth
His surrogate Mother fading fast
He, helpless, weeps
And the Mother hails him, King
There kneels a youth
A ring offered to the Love of his life
Promise ensured
And his Love hails him, King
There stands a man
Confronting she who has conquered the world
At last, triumph
And the Conqueror hails him, King
There stands a man
Betrayed by one who was once his dearest Friend
Together in death
Only then does the Friend hail him, King
5 April 2024
Ne’er have I regretted a promise more
And decades since last I shed a tear
Yet I will respect thy wish
Breath for breath, and life for life.
This is quiet a long one; there is a surprisingly large amount to cover with this section of my poem-outline. It’s fun, though!
Temper thy expectations,
Dearest friend of mine.
We know not her wishes
Nor what she may’ve endured.
Wise though thy words,
I cannot my heart restrain.
E’en to see her mor than I once hoped
Look; anon and we arrive.
My queen, all hail. Safe trip, I pray?
Though, alas, it was not so for us.
The prince’s sight is… changed, to say
And the princess will not leave her room.
Changed, you say?
Did he fall to fairy’s curse?
‘Tis best if I tend to him,
While you thy daughter greet.
Agreed. Then I shall go.
A knock, rejection, but–
I am neither prince nor Phillip.
May I enter?
Panic, shock
Already she stands at my door!?
Long have I longed and dreaded this meeting
But… A smidge of courage, I open the door.
I… I am sorry I’m not more
Not a princess, not bold, not brave
Just… me.
I… I never even tried to leave.
Her words like chimes blow past
None settle. Instead,
She is in my arms, at last.
And there we stay, in silence.
~~~~~
The prince before me, changed indeed.
Mortals were not meant for fairy sight
Only one other I know of, but such is luck
That one is me, and I can guide you.
Well enough, and thank thee, truly.
But what e’en is the point?
All is worthless, ash and dust.
All… all that is… ‘cept thee?
Indeed, even when Death takes me
Never shall I age or rot.
But that is of no import.
Come, there is much work to do.
~~~~~
A wond’rous, glorious week
‘Tis not so bad a way to go
Though regrets remain, I will not lament
My time is up, it seems
The princess collapsed,
And fades so fast!
O great Queen of sorceries,
Is there aught thou canst do?
There is. Indeed, long planned.
But I do not like it.
My friend, my queen, dearest Hannah,
Are you sure this is thy wish?
Never have I been more sure.
Aurora has not even had
An honest chance to live.
Can I, as mother,
Prize my life above my child’s?
Mother, what meanest thou?
What plan have you concocted?
A quiet dread fills my chest
Surely, you cannot mean…?
Dearest Isaac, know I love you,
And I’m proud of who you are.
Whate’er happens, we’ll watch o’er you.
Maleficent, ‘tis time.
Ne’er have I regretted a promise more
And decades since last I shed a tear
Yet I will respect thy wish
Breath for breath, and life for life.
W-what?
I am… awake?
Is this Heaven?
But no, there is the prince, and Phillip, and…
No.
No no no.
Please tell me she did not!
What worth have I, a timid girl,
That a queen would yield her life for me?!
6 February 2024
Phillip, what cruelty is this?
The treasure, though found, is but dross
My eyes now see nothing but bones
And she, for sure, no princess can be
Hello! ‘Tis Phillip,
Though now much at a loss.
Two wayward children follow at my heels
Who, though royalty, need constant minding
Rooms we require to stay the night
Dear princess, can thou tend to that?
I’ll watch the prince and the horses
And a pigeon send to our queen
M-me?
In there?
No task could be more terrifying!
Ah… he left ere I spoke.
I yet lack the courage to decline…
One step by step,
To the dreaded counter I tread
T-, two rooms for us, please?
Eh? What meanest thou, where is my coin?
None on my person, and even had I,
Which coin is worth what?
At such a loss; what should I do?
E’en this simple thing goes awry…
Phillip, what cruelty is this?
The treasure, though found, is but dross
My eyes now see nothing but bones
And she, for sure, no princess can be
Spoke she ever otherwise?
Oft did they warn thee, thy mother and her friend,
Of the dangers of magic, now felt.
Is it a shock they spoke true?
Still, I’ll help where I can.
Already the pigeon alights
Both queens ere long should arrive
Inside, what a mess,
Worse than I had supposed.
Dear princess, thy best was enough
But I have aplenty. Good sir, three silver a room?
Embarrassment, regret
Why thought I not to go ask?
What place have I in a world such as this?
Just allow me to hide away here.